Riedawriter23

B.E.A. Utiful Jig. You're first paragraph was so full of lush vocabulary that I was hardly able to contain myself. You're words were entrancing here. LOVED it.

WOW, was this little girl getting raped by her brother? I may be extremely wrong or I could be right I have no shame about it. Well I love it ...

Thank you. I'm really liking this feedback.

Oh and by the way Sureal, I DID scrap the whole blurb and I started over with a new onw. I like it better and it fit more with my ...

OMG meg you got that off of Bleach and I love that song you cheater*points at work*write a reall one okie dokie and nice try^_^*busted*

WOW! I really hope this is a dream! This was amazing and_oooooo, I just can't wait until the next! Dream or no dream?, Jon or no Jon!? It gave me ...

This was wonderful. I need more! More I tell you. I'm addicted to your writing, it's just so awesome and I feel like all of your characters are real and ...

Amazing. That is all I can say.

Well, I'm finished with the novel now, I just submitted my query letter to an agent so I'll tell you all the info when it gets published!

Yeah Lindz like you can make more sense LOL! Still love it Brad. YOU ROCK! (HAD to read it again, just to be ready for the next one.)

Your words in this impress me more and more. I love how everyone tells Jon to get laid, that's hylarious. Good job on this one.

I've watched the movie but never got a chance to read the book. Thanks!

I really like this. Really great discriptions and analogies. I esspecially liked when you were discribing beauty to be more than skin deep.

Thank you! Great critique and thanks also for the website. :)

I already wrote the book by the way you guys. I just wanted critique on this blurb before I sent in my enquiry. This book is Fantasy Fiction also so ...