Riedawriter23

XDXDXD I still find this incredibly hilarious! Butter, you're wierd. ;) But, awesome as always! *high fives* ~Rieda

Okay, what I was trying to say was while she's in this beautiful place she's still waiting for this guy to come and...seduce? I don't really want to use that ...

I loved it! XDXD *still laughing* Brilliant Mesh! Yay for Donoism! ...I wanna hear Dono sing. :(

Ms. Carlyle. XD All I can say is that that woman is crazy. I definately would have hurt her by now or quit my job. It's one thing to have ...

Lol, I'm actually glad to have this reaction because there are some major twists to this story and you're all following the perfect path! :p This was just part of ...

XD, it wasn't actually about sex. Though, it was really about an extension in general, I was using the case of a wand...but whatever extension that is visualized here is ...

I liked the wording in this acutally. The only problem for me was that you have one period in each stanza and it made it a little awkward to read. ...

I really like this poem. The description was really good and the ending was great. I have nothing to...critique actually. lol. It was awesome though. I liked the meaning of ...

This was a very nice poem. I think the fact that it had feeling behind it made it even better. I could visualize the scene very well. Nice job on ...

Thank you all. To tell the truth I know that I overfill my poetry with all those unneeded parts. It's just that the picture is so vivid that I feel ...

I really enjoyed this one. Everything is coming together really well. And awwww, Wyes is crying, he's such a baby lol jk. I'm glad we're starting to learn more about ...

XD Clau that was hilarious! And when reading this you actually do get caught up LOL! Poor Kyle Jr. , What did ever happen to him? I love how you ...

OMG, Yeah, when you said there was going to be a shock I didn't think it'd be that kind of shock. I actually told you that Quinn was hot at ...

Kyle and Ariel? *gasp* This is getting so good. Personally I think Pros. is amazing. Disturbing is like the Earth's misplaced halo. Everyone's drawn to it whether they'll admit it ...

You're really quick. Tis becoming wonderful Brad. I love your first person writing. Very different from Pros. and Ch. and yet so appealing. Great Job! ~Rieda