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Re: Tenkurion
Greetings, This poem was phenomenal. The spacing, rhythm, vocabulary variety were all well done. This was a visual, auditory, and tactile experience into a moment of time for this creature. ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Girl or Beast
Greetings, The writing in this piece is well thought out, that much is obvious. I appreciate the rhyme scheme, shortness, and the subject matter is interesting as well. As the ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: 2. The Mysterious Door
Greetings, The writing style is under-developed, cliché, descriptive where unnecessary and not descriptive enough when needed. I felt like this whole piece was written in one go, with a vague ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Promted Writing_Take Two
Greetings, The writing draws the reader in and demands attention from the mysteriousness of it. It is also just quick enough to keep the reader's attention moving forward. It's like ...
Apr 3, 2016
