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Re: ES+GP (prolog)
Thank you for thinking so :) Don't worry, all I have to do if tweak the name in chapter one and I'll type it up for YWS.
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: The Angel's Fall
As for how I wrote this during an Algebra final... Well... Let's just say I wrote it and was editing it on the paper I was supposed to be showing ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: The Angel's Fall
Thank you :) I can't thank you enough for the reviews and the input. I'm always thankful to listen to peoples' opinions and suggestions on my work. I'll try to ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Cherry Blossom Heaven
That sounds like a very deep experience for you, and the poem sunds even better with knowing that! :) Ad witht hose two lines corrected it flows oh so much ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: True North
All nitpicks have been previously picked at, so I can't say anything about this other than I really like it- and I don't like many really short story clips. :)
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Last Stand
Again, thank you all! This is way better reception than I thought I'd receive. I'll go back and add punctuation and whatnot, and maybe wrestle with my other poems to ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Last Stand
Thank you! :) And I corrected it, I'll check with the punctuation and whatnot.
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Make Me Whole
Whether or not you wrote this a 'long time' ago, it's good. I liked the flow and the length of the stanzas, but my favorite one was the final. It ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Freshly Fallen: Ch.1 'His Wish'
Thank you! :) I write by hand and then usually just write it up on my Mac, which has its' ups and downs when it comes to writing. I'll look ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: A Man Born Twice
I really like this! It is dramatic and although it didn't exactly spell out what it was about (minus the title) it left it up to several interpretations.
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: The Adventures of Death and Plague (chapter two)
:D I was compared to Edgar Allen Poe... My day has been made. And as for where I got the inspiration, my friend and I used to play a game ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Freshly Fallen: Ch.1 'His Wish'
Thank you all so much for your feedback and insights, oh and the compliments are nice too. :) Thank you guys!
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: A Needle In The Vein and The Honest Truth
This is so so so good in that capturing, sad way. I like it so much but it makes me a little sad. You so earned a follow from me. ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: The Coward's Way Out
Wow. I don't think I can sum it up any better. Just... Wow. :)
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Wolf Brother, Spirit Walker, Soul Eater.
OH MY GOD the Chronicles of Ancient Darkness are my favorite favorite favorite books! You guys have read them all now haven't you? :)
Apr 20, 2011