Rena0421

I'm Rena and hi! First off, I read a few lines and immediately thought, 'why is this poem about cigarettes?' But no, it's a love poem, right? Or is it ...

Oh, my gosh. This poem made me cry a little and that's a hard thing to do for me. I am speechless, really. Wow. Whoa. This was crazy good. It ...

Okay, I'm Rena. Short review today: I like it. I really did. It was interesting and pretty easy to follow, too. It was almost funny how the other kids are ...

I liked it. But sadly, I didn't understand so much of it. It was a little hard to follow, especially how the page ran so long. But the way you ...

It was good. but I did find a few mistakes. Like the way you never capitalized I. But it was obvious that you did that one on purpose so I ...

good. it was a little confusing but very poetic. maybe it was just me but i couldn't figure out what the poem was about. first i thought it was about ...

hey. I'm Rena. Nice intro. But I have to admit, I giggled a little. I thought it was supposed to be funny after you said 'It was all a joke." ...

Whoa. Great story. The guy was sick and twisted and he knew it. But something about it didn't scream 'perv' to me. I don't know. It was so strange though ...

awwww. Good poem. It gave me the visual of an old village from like the 1700s with the church bells ringing. Or maybe around the 1800s. I don't know. But ...

It is a good poem but it's more of like a narrative. Towards the end you started cussing just suddenly and it sort of threw me off. Take some of ...

Loved it It's a heart breaker though. The only problem was with the I'm near the end but someone has already touched bases on that one. I liked how the ...

awwww. I could have cried at that. she killed herself. but anyways. good poem, nice flow and it sounded more like a short story than anything. But still, good poem, ...

I almost chuckled when I was reading it. It was funny in a way. haha. Nothing to say you need to change right now though. I loved the quote boxes ...

I must say: 1. One Prayer Away by Kendra Norman-Bellamy. 2. Elisha's Bones by Don Hoesel 3. The Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger 4. I would sat To ...

You had me at the beginning but with a cliffhanger ending....no. It makes me so mad when a book just leaves you hanging like that. I always want to read ...