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Thank you :) nice to finally meet another Californian on here

Thank you very much :) I loved writing it. Glad you love it

I wouldn't have changed a thing. I enjoyed this poem immensely. I felt that in your stanzas held truth and I could feel what you felt. Never stop writing poetry. ...

Thanks you I rather very much appreciate you input. I'm new to poetry and only started for the unit in school but found I enjoy it and am good at ...

Well I appreciate it. I do admit that I rushed it since it was in a fact a school assignment with a time on it. Im not very good with ...

Ha well thanks you its a first for me. I actually has trouble writing about myself. I'm not one for writing about my feelings though the emulate themselves into my ...

Really nice the title drew me in

Thanks you so much Butterfly18 I will take you up on your offer. Same to you JP. I really appreciate it

HAHA well thank you very much. I am going to try and add a little more structure. But it may turn into something like my family yoga...o.o everyone was asleep ...

Thanks for all of your help. lol and to be honest I don't really have any structure. I have tried making an organizer at the belonging of every chapter (which ...

Thanks JP I appreciate it!

I truly enjoyed reading this. It was fast paced and descriptive. When you described the fire I could smell it, and taste it, and see it curling up into the ...

No no. Don't worry. I rather like your corrections and pointers. It's glad to see someone else's perspective besides friends I go to school with (not that you wouldn't be ...

I love fresh take on vampires. It was humorous and I over how it wasn't too glamoured. I would lokke to read this if it was an entire book. The ...

To both of you thanks for your comments. This is a book review for a book called Thirteen Days till Midnight. by Patrick Carman. you can google it. i assume ...