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Re: Holes and Pieces
I ended it and felt this heart felt. Keep at the poetry. I like the way yu broke up the stanzas and lines,nit really communicated the tonenof the story you ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: The Lost Light
Huh. Tis is interesting. Did I miss something? It seems a little rather fast paced if this is the first chapter. Correct me if I missed something please. But I'd ...
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Re: Crystal Clear - Prologue
Ok first off I Am In Love!!!!!!!!! This is completely original. There is noting else like it out there. I like the supernatural and gotta admit vampires are some of ...
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Re: Someone
I think you idea is brilliant and creative. It's fresh and I love how it's written by an inanimate object. The only thing is I was very very confused by ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: The Blood Curse
Liked it. This got me intrigued. I'd like to see more to see how good and original it gets. To be honest the title got it's hooks into me and ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 19
To be honest Lumi, I loved this. I found it heartfelt and really well written. It was truly beautiful. If this was an actual song I would be downloading it ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: Darkness Unpolluted
Since you comment on my thing I shall comment on yours mwhahaha! :) I really loved this. Its genuine and I think its pretty damn true sometimes. If this was ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: First Light - Chapter Three
Brilliant once again. God I love this so much. Haha yes I lied and I decided I'd read one paragraph and well haha I made it through the entire page. ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: First Light - Chapter Two
Brilliant Mate! Read it in under a minute. I just cant get over how good and entrancing your writing is. Whenever I finish reading an installment or chapter im hungry ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Crazy, Stupid, Brilliant
Jp, I really enjoyed your review. It was solid and stayed brilliant beginning to end. It was brief and humorous in the beginning and stated reasons WHY the movie was ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism - Chapter One (1)
The title alone drew me in. By the first sentence? You had me hooked for life. This seems like it would be a brilliant book. I love the nickname that ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: The Vampire Upstairs
Ok this was hilarious and made me laugh out loud. It was parodious but it made a lot of sense if this was an entire book I would read it ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 15
I like superheroes and comic books so this was immediately intriguing for me. I liked it and the twist you have on it. I would read another installment or chapter. ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight Fire
I really liked this. The vampires seem so realistic and not overly exaggerated or godlike. The names are unique and I really liked the ending. I don't know whether its ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: First Light - Chapter One
OK first off the title alone drew me in. Secondly IT WAS REFRIGERATINGLY brilliant! Once i finished reading I couldn't wait for more. my god that is better then some ...
Sep 24, 2011
