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RenGrey

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Holes and Pieces

    I ended it and felt this heart felt. Keep at the poetry. I like the way yu broke up the stanzas and lines,nit really communicated the tonenof the story you ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Lost Light

    Huh. Tis is interesting. Did I miss something? It seems a little rather fast paced if this is the first chapter. Correct me if I missed something please. But I'd ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Crystal Clear - Prologue

    Ok first off I Am In Love!!!!!!!!! This is completely original. There is noting else like it out there. I like the supernatural and gotta admit vampires are some of ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Someone

    I think you idea is brilliant and creative. It's fresh and I love how it's written by an inanimate object. The only thing is I was very very confused by ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Blood Curse

    Liked it. This got me intrigued. I'd like to see more to see how good and original it gets. To be honest the title got it's hooks into me and ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Deleted 19

    To be honest Lumi, I loved this. I found it heartfelt and really well written. It was truly beautiful. If this was an actual song I would be downloading it ...

    Oct 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Darkness Unpolluted

    Since you comment on my thing I shall comment on yours mwhahaha! :) I really loved this. Its genuine and I think its pretty damn true sometimes. If this was ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: First Light - Chapter Three

    Brilliant once again. God I love this so much. Haha yes I lied and I decided I'd read one paragraph and well haha I made it through the entire page. ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: First Light - Chapter Two

    Brilliant Mate! Read it in under a minute. I just cant get over how good and entrancing your writing is. Whenever I finish reading an installment or chapter im hungry ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Crazy, Stupid, Brilliant

    Jp, I really enjoyed your review. It was solid and stayed brilliant beginning to end. It was brief and humorous in the beginning and stated reasons WHY the movie was ...

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism - Chapter One (1)

    The title alone drew me in. By the first sentence? You had me hooked for life. This seems like it would be a brilliant book. I love the nickname that ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Vampire Upstairs

    Ok this was hilarious and made me laugh out loud. It was parodious but it made a lot of sense if this was an entire book I would read it ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hunted ch. 15

    I like superheroes and comic books so this was immediately intriguing for me. I liked it and the twist you have on it. I would read another installment or chapter. ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Moonlight Fire

    I really liked this. The vampires seem so realistic and not overly exaggerated or godlike. The names are unique and I really liked the ending. I don't know whether its ...

    Sep 24, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: First Light - Chapter One

    OK first off the title alone drew me in. Secondly IT WAS REFRIGERATINGLY brilliant! Once i finished reading I couldn't wait for more. my god that is better then some ...

    Sep 24, 2011


Writing is the geometry of the soul.
— Plato