ReiiSquid

Hello! I liked the way you wrote it in first person, I can't pull that off easily. But, you did that well. Good job! Though, some paragraphs I would combine ...

Hello! This was really, really deep and kind of sad. At least for me. Others might no think so, and it might also be the nostalgic music... Just a few ...

I had my younger sister read this. She's about fourteen and uses this word at least three times a day, usually when ranting about the idiots in the world (you ...

I like the story! It was well written and I really like historical stories like this, so good job. There was only one thing that got me, but you're probably ...

I liked this short story. When I read that the subject was suicide, I was a bit cautious since so many people try to write it. But this is something ...

Well written. I love how much you describe each person and the surroundings. The names make the characters and place stand out and have a sort mid-Eastern vibe to them. ...

This was written well. I like period stories but I haven't read much about the western expansion, but I have faith this is accurate. The amount of death, however, seems ...

Really good, just like the last chapter. There were a few errors, but no too many. We all make mistakes, an people find errors all the time in my work. ...

I thought this was awesome. I find it entertaining when writers make objects or animals seem human, than reveal their identity at the end. And just so you know, I ...

This was kind of inspiring. I feel like I'm wasting away as I'm writing this, but it was good. the story seemed to be a commentary on modern life, about ...

It's pretty good so far. It kind of reminds of that one TV show, but better dialogue and no bad acting. As far as I gather, if Emmalyn isn't related, ...