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True, it's not. But since when is silliness supposed to be intentionally intellectual or challenging?

*shakes head* I never did finish this book.

Thanks, guys. It's nice to know that sometimes, I am capable of writing something people like.

Thanks a lot. I'm happy you like it. I'll be posting the next chapter soon.

I definitely enjoyed reading this. The rhythm was really fun to read, and the rhymes were very well chosen. I usually don't like an inconsistent rhyming scheme, but this worked.

Depends on what kind you buy, really. Cocoa puffs, sure, but not others. Besides, milk doesn't suddenly have less calcuim just because you had chocolate syrup to it.

Very beautiful. I never thought an umbrella could be so poetic. The only thing I didn't like, though it was hardly a problem, was that the second two stanza has ...

wow . . . Someone who is worse than me. Honestly, Sharty, if you ar being sincere, grow up.

Aw, I know this was posted a long time ago and is pretty much irrelevant, but . . . . aw!

Thanks a lot. These are definitely some ideas I will keep in mind when revising it. Though I'm not sure how much more anecdotal I can be considering what I ...

It's interesting seeing you, who makes a big deal out of the tiniest errors, writing a poem like this. It was pretty amusing.

That would be great. I'd love to see you expand this.

There's not much I can say about this, since it was just some inspired rambling. It was enjoyable to read, though. It had a nice feel to it.

Yeah, I agree. It needs to have longer lines. However, as usual, you have a beautiful tone and some very nice use of language.

What is freedom of expression without the freedom to offend? Somewhat amusing. The dialogue sounded very authentic, which I like. It's nice when boredom has results like this.