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Oh crap! Just because it doesn't show now doesn't mean you can't improve. It's not owrthless if you tried. Just practice.

Yikes. Thanks for pointing that out. Sometimes when I type really fast I type things that make no sence. By "pubbing" I meant "puddles."

Well, Brad thinks anyone who doesn't think America is the best country in the world is an ingornant fool, and that anyone who would dare say anything bad about his ...

What she said.

Bootiful. Really nice flow, great images and diction. And the line breaks didn't seem like random choices, as this style of poetry often does.

Very rarely have I ever seen a news article this short other than in the freebies put out by the major newspapers. It might be more interesting if you made ...

If it really was that minor, she wouldn't have needed to stay in the hospital over night as long as she had someone to watch her and make sure she ...

Me like. Me like. The perfect frustration poem. Though I am rather curious about who "him" is.

My suggestions: Give us more information, and if you don't do it already, read more books with the type of seeting you're using.

I enjoyed it, but it needs to be longer to really have an impact on the reader.

Thanks. Any thoughts on what the ogre actually did with John? I'm writing a novel version of this and I have pretty much all the details but that.

Not bad if you haven't written any poetry in a while. I kind of like it. I would reccomnd you expand on the idea, though. That would make it more ...

This seemed more like a monologue in poetry format. I'm sorry, but what's so poetic about it? There didn't even seem to be any real reason for where you chose ...

Oy vey. Why are people so hung up on being original? We'd have a lot more quality stuff out there if people were mainly concerned with telling the best story ...

Interesting. Not that good, but I wouldn't call it bad. It's fascinating to see what people come up with when they start writing with nothing in mind.