Rei

Yeppers. Can't wait until the season starts again.

I find it fascinating how people automatically think that it's death she is considering. The reason this seems like such a unique suicide story is because it's NOT a suicide ...

Meh. Maybe it is hokey, but it really means a lot to me. I think I might have been asking myself those questions when I wrote it.

His efforts, and efforts inspired by his, raised the money needed to advance research and build treatment facilities that might not have existed otherwise. It was his dedication and concern ...

Not bad. Only, why didn't you give the male character a name, and why did you wait until the third paragraph to give us the woman's name? Unless you had ...

Then it's not an essay.

Last line, fifth stanza, take out one of the "then"s.

Not sure I like it, but I enjoyed the spirit behind it. Careful about choosing words just because they rhyme.

Everything seems like the best thing you've ever written when you're writing it. The important thing is to not feel bad when you realize it might not be, and learn ...

You are a very odd human being. I like that in a person.

Good idea, but the rhyming really does take away from the otherall effect of the piece.

Okaaaaaaaaaay. What the heck were you thinking when you wrote this?

Yes, essays can be stories, but just because something is a story doesn't mean it is fiction.

If this is an essay, it should be in the non-fiction section.

Come on! Doesn't anyone here like theatre?