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This is very cute! I wrote something with a similar idea about procrastination. I like the tone it maintains, and I feel like it hits all the feelings about writer's ...

What a neat short story. Going in, I liked mostly liked the flow of sentences and narration. I also felt the dialogue felt natural. I felt it was an easy ...

I love this. When I first opened this page I was amazed by the structure and placement of the stanzas. They're falling and all over the place, kind of like ...

I like it. It seems like it would make a good opening because it shows this duality of the character. He is a killer but also a lover of his ...

I find in your piece there is a lot of truth with what you say. You're right that there are harsh realities people must face when you grow up. Although ...

Why hello there. It seems I have stumbled upon a story and as needs to more have reviews, I shall review this work. I did read your last chapter, and ...

Overall, I really enjoy this piece. I thought it was sad and many people could relate to it. I also like how you made to address the mother. Now I ...

Hello again, I really like your story. I like how well written this is and how you set up different problems for the characters not everything is hunky-dory. Ivy hates ...

Whoa! This was a true story? Anyway, it was very well written. I am so sad there are no review. It is so freaking good. I feel bad because there ...

Hi there, Red for a review! It's cool to see a play here at YMS. I have a little experience with plays and musicals and scripts, so hopefully my feedback ...

Hi Red for a review, Even though I came into the story with pretty much knowing very little about it, I liked it. Also because I started in the middle, ...

Hi there Red for a review! From what I read, I would like to read your novel. I like romance and realistic fiction. However, I think I would have preferred ...

Hi there here for a review! Let me start off by saying that I appreciate how you added a summery, so reviews and readers had a better idea what was ...

Hi there here for a review! It's a shame not more people read this story. It's my favorite that I saw this week. You really depicted the father and daughter ...

Hi there Red for a review, I like the snapshot you have here of a, I think a husband and wife or a close girlfriend or boyfriend facing off. I ...