RedWritingHood

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This is a really cool poem. I like the rhythm to it and the passion really shows in the words. That's a really good coping mechanism, to chant when you're ...

No problem :) I just thought I'd mention it, in case it was an accident.

I'll try to vote for you :) Just so you know, a better place for this might be the forums. I think they have a specific feed just for NaNo ...

Sorry, this was an accident. I can't figure out how to delete, only edit!

This is awesome! I'm usually not a big poetry fan, but this really seems to say what you're feeling. One suggestion, and I totally get if you don't want to ...

You could even try a semicolon between the first two parts, it just felt like describing all three things in one sentence was a little squished. Thank you :)

I'm not sure if I'm explaining this right, but in that particular context you can. Such as, in a past tense story, you can say "He jumped, moving quickly between ...

It was mostly the last sentence that seemed like a little much. Maybe break it up into smaller sentences like "My own ratty, auburn hair was tied back in tangles ...