RedHeathen

Hey Sumer! I think this is a beautiful poem, it has actually made me appreciate the beauty of the rose, even though I am not really a flower fan. Your ...

Hello, Red here! I think your story is beautiful, and I can visualize it in my head. The message was true and anyone with half a heart can relate to ...

Hey man, it's Zack! Firstly, I loved your formatting. The use of capitalization on "They", was a real joy to look at, and got the point across very well, almost ...

Hey, Morrigan! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece, and I think you expertly captured the disillusionment of L.A, which is even more impressive to do if you haven't been. In ...

Overall, I think this is a realistic, and incredibly well written piece. It's descriptions are great and true to what I've heard from war veterans. First stanza definitely is a ...

I think the poem tells a very interesting story, I like it, and the adjectives and metaphors are very good. Next time, maybe have less syllables between each rhyme, as ...