RebelAngel

It was very nicely written- but sometimes the phrase breaks were a bit confusing. I enjoyed reading it, but at times, the point of the piece was lost on me. ...

I loved it! Damn girl, the imagery was fantastic! I loved the almost magical feeling I got reading lines like: "The Sun rises everyday To kiss the mourning Sky," :D ...

It was interesting- but I have to be brutally honest, the grammar was horrible. I had trouble enjoying the content at all, because there were almost no punctuation or capitalization. ...

I almost cried when I read this, because I've felt the exact same thing. Those meaningless, empty conversations with the boy I loved- like nothing at all ever existed between ...

WOW. I mean really. Wow. This story gave me gooseflesh. I absolutely loved it, but DAMN. It was very confusing. I understand that it was from a six year old's ...

I think this has a wonderful, and very relatable lesson in it. There are a lot of people who have experienced a loss in their family. However, there are also ...

I really liked this poem :D "I'll keep playing with flames, Hope that they melt the ice. So one day your wall may crumble, And you can learn to trust ...

In a crowd full of faces In all these different places and in all these vast spaces; I liked this opening line- it caught my attention. Original. Yours is the ...

Wow...this poem made me stop and blink. "I’ve been hurt by true love before. It’s hard to love you, When I love like a whore. And I’ve never felt so ...

I think that the poem is excellent. You managed to turn something like a simple car-ride into something that is interesting and fun to read about. I liked your word ...

This poem was....saddening, in a way that's hard to capture. Like the view of someone locked in an insane asylum, staring out the single window into the night sky. I ...

This poem was good, but confused me a little. Perhaps it was because I couldn't really pick up the style. However, the concept is excellent. It presents good visuals, I.e. ...

First off, the story was fantastic. I loved the stye, which was calm and elegant, and above all, the descriptions. You're excellent with that, in all of your work. You ...