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RebeccaLynn13

  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Love You, Grandpa

    Of course it was totally worth it. Your writing is commendable!

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Cress (short story)

    Oh my goodness!!! I feel like I was In A trance. Your writing really pulls the readers in. Truly inspiring. Cress is so believable and her feelings are so REAL!!! ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bradley

    First I just need to say that this is an amazing piece of work. For starters, I applaud your emotional phrases. Your ending line is fantastic! It really closes the ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye

    To begin I really loved this piece. I really admire how you show the innocence of the main chareacter and you explain it through the characters actions. I loved the ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye

    To begin I really loved this piece. I really admire how you show the innocence of the main chareacter and you explain it through the characters actions. I loved the ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Escape

    I love this piece. I can relate to feeling like you need to put a mask on to hide your inner feelings. This word choice overall was excellent! I loved ...

    Dec 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: there was a time when my friends included everyone who smiled back

    This poem is truly inspiring I have never seen a more touching and e!optional piece. I feel like everyone can relate. I definitely can! Thank you for sharing something really ...

    Dec 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Love You, Grandpa

    Really truly inspiring my grandfather died when I was only six years old. I understand how you feel that you never got to know him well because I feel the ...

    Dec 9, 2016


It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.
— Albus Dumbledore