RealWriter99

Its great, has the right amount of wording for the characters but my only issue is that sometimes you write too much about too little. Example-feeling like life is weighing ...

This song is good and is about an important matter. It flows and sounds amazing (I sang it out loud to get the feel for it). It sounds like a ...

I thought this story was good. The only thing I would say is it's a bit hard to stay interested in. I personally think its a bit of a tiresome ...

I think it was a lovely topic to write about and I hope it is something dear to your heart. But I agree with Angel- it seems like you forced ...

I think this was very good. Though your describing words could have been better. Example- prettier. You may want to fing some more unique describing words. My advice is either ...