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Re: Chapter 2: Snow Valley
Yeah... I see what you mean in that first bit.. haha... As for your other concern about them feeling too human, they are kind of like Puss in Boots and ...
Oct 29, 2024 -
Re: Chapter 1: End's Beginning
Thank you! That helps a lot, and I'll see what I can do to incorporate that!
Oct 29, 2024 -
Re: Prologue: Breaking the Silence
Thank you so much! I've been looking for ways to improve this as it didn't quite seem right. This helps a lot, and I'll take consideration of this for future ...
Oct 22, 2024 -
Re: The Trick-or-Treat clown | Chapter One | A strange voice
Ooohhh spooky! Very interesting how the children disappear just like that.
Oct 16, 2024