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Re: The Infinite void - Chapter 1
Hello! Just popping by to give a quick review! This is a very exciting and interesting beginning to your story with twists and turns, that leave questions about what has ...
Oct 28, 2024 -
Re: The Hallows’ Eve kids
This is a great poem for the spooky season of October, Especially with All Hallows' Eve. I like how the poem starts off with the children being little jokesters, who ...
Oct 22, 2024 -
Re: *******
Hi! Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this poem. It was really calming and honestly, really relaxing to read. Having based it off of a meditation technique as ...
Oct 22, 2024 -
Re: Just keep breathing
First of all, this is a really good poem that portrays stress, and can connect with many people and their experiences. I like how it's formatted so it seems like ...
Oct 21, 2024 -
Re: There’s a curious little creature
This poem is really cute, and matches with the spooky season of October really well. I really like how you incorporated a rhyme with the lines "Eerie was a spider, ...
Oct 16, 2024 -
Re: A
This is really good. I really like how the suspenseful situation drew me into the rest of the story, creating a sense of wanting to know more. It shows a ...
Oct 16, 2024
