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  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Infinite void - Chapter 1

    Hello! Just popping by to give a quick review! This is a very exciting and interesting beginning to your story with twists and turns, that leave questions about what has ...

    Oct 28, 2024
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Hallows’ Eve kids

    This is a great poem for the spooky season of October, Especially with All Hallows' Eve. I like how the poem starts off with the children being little jokesters, who ...

    Oct 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: *******

    Hi! Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this poem. It was really calming and honestly, really relaxing to read. Having based it off of a meditation technique as ...

    Oct 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Just keep breathing

    First of all, this is a really good poem that portrays stress, and can connect with many people and their experiences. I like how it's formatted so it seems like ...

    Oct 21, 2024
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: There’s a curious little creature

    This poem is really cute, and matches with the spooky season of October really well. I really like how you incorporated a rhyme with the lines "Eerie was a spider, ...

    Oct 16, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: A

    This is really good. I really like how the suspenseful situation drew me into the rest of the story, creating a sense of wanting to know more. It shows a ...

    Oct 16, 2024


That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead