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Re: The promise of a seed
I loved this story. First of all, The mango tree and the time that passes represents how much Jacaira has grown in her life. The planting of the seed represents ...
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Re: GFB and The Machine
Wow! Ok, this story was very interesting, and I am excited to see where this goes. First of all, all of your descriptions were insanely good, and they gave me ...
May 1, 2023 -
Re: Blood drive
Hi There! First of all, this is a really good story. It kept me in suspense, and the ending was pretty insane (okay, yes, I said insane, can't stop me ...
Apr 18, 2023 -
Re: Storybook Sun (First Chapter)
I love this! Imagination is a powerful thing, and this land that this boy creates in his head is all too real. I daydream a lot myself. The world outside ...
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Re: Angel
This is an awesome story. I love horror stories, and this is one of the best ones I have ever read. First of all, I love the opening. Accidental murders ...
Apr 5, 2023 -
Re: The World Isn't Cruel. The People Who Live in it Are.
WOOOOOOOOOOW. This is a very good story. There are so many twists and turns, and you really capture the essence of being the parent of a missing child well. I ...
Apr 5, 2023 -
Re: Hermione's Day Off - Chapter One
This is a great story. I feel like Hermione gets the short straw in the books. I mean, without her, everything could have gone terribly wrong. Also, I love that ...
Apr 5, 2023