RayquazaKid

Holy crapoli. That was simply excellent. I loved your imagery here, I certainly think Hell could definitely be like that. And, if this is not hell, is is really darn ...

I am not sure what the exact temperature was, but I’m sure it was something above forty degree s Celsius. It was enough to extract every ounce of energy out ...

“Melanie, stop . ” I cried. When it is the end of a quote, it needs to be a period, not a comma. I was running after her on a ...

I thought that it was going to be the last time I would hear her voice, or see her. I heard it again. As I was sleeping on the rugged ...

Still staring, I turned my attention slightly lower down. Below her small nose and below her thin lips until I reached her chest. That was when I remembered why I ...

“Stupid parents . ” I mumbled to myself, running up the stairs. I think this should be a period instead of a comma. His sandy blonde hair was incredibly messy ...

I know you wanted me to do the second chapter. But I'm feeling generous, so Ima do this one first. Hope you don't mind. :oops: “Please Victoria!” Alexander pleaded as ...

I let the water from the shower drip Amanda’s blood off from my body and into the murky drainage pipes. I wiped off water from my face, looking at the ...

Rayen’s eyes opened in the middle of a dead sleep. Where am I? h er It's kind of like this with quotes too. Since this is right after a thought, ...

I knew this was a bad idea. I couldn’t help but notice the judgmental glances that were aimed at me as I walked down the school hallways. I was used ...

It is often said that true happiness lies within... that is exactly where I go to find my special place. The outside world has an ugly face (no space between ...

The alluring scent of freshly cooked bacon surrounded me as I slowly opened my tired eyes. There was an intense thumping feeling in my head but I was able to ...

Heya. :) Red is bad, green is good, and blue is comments on the both of them. Orange is just changes. Rayen ambled down a cobble stoned corner. The rain ...

Pretty good article. :) Like mostly everyone said, Skins beat everyone to the punch. I didn't see anything else wrong with it that he didn't pint out. Indeed, its a ...

CHLOE RUSSO 26th June 12: 54 AM We were forging ahead with the case. We had found some footprints which could possibly lead us to the criminal. Tim was not ...