Ray112

Thanks for the review! :) if you want to know more about my story or read more, I post more frequently on this website: I like the format for stories ...

Thanks for the reviews! :)

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I liked this, for obvious reasons it made me think of abraham lincoln vampire hunter. But at the same time i thought that movie was kick-ass and so I think ...

Wow! Good stuff, I liked this. In a way when you mentioned antidote it made me think of Kahlil kabrahms poem on pain. Anyway, keep it up. I look forward ...

This was really good! I can see how much your writing's improved since the last chapter. Can't wait for the next one :)

Haha, Thanks for reading, and yeah I don't blame you for getting scared...I get scared too cause most of it's true O.O xD

thanks for the review!! :) I'll be coming out with the next chapter very soon. :)

thanks for the review :) the more feedback the better. my next chapter will be up soon :)

Thanks Dana! :) actually while I was writing I was having some trouble with keeping a consistent tense. My actual intention is to keep it present tense. Also, I appreciate ...

Thank you for reading, I'd appreciate any comment for support please. :)

thankyou for the comments everyone. please comment on the other chapters too. I need all the feed back I can get. thank you.

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