Ravaien

Indeed, I often wish for the same! I love haikus, they are so amazing and this one is too! Is simple but is meaningful. I love the last line, especially. ...

Hey, Laure here to review! Suppression of expression, the title drew me in already and I was pleasantly surprised by what you’ve written. This seems like a stream-of-consciousness poem to ...

I'm very impressed with this poem, I love how you used short sentences to empathize the significance of each and every sentence. Making it much more dramatic and realistic, well, ...

Hey Omi1, here to review. I'm not a Nazi anything because I have absolutely no right since my own grammatical structure is all over the place. I'm here to say ...

This is a really interesting poem, it sounds almost lyrical to me... well. Who am I to say, I'm terrible at distinguishing poem structures anyway. But I'm dropping by, because ...

Shadows never stretch or loom, or whisper softly certain doom. Fires wouldn't die away- Ashes wouldn't hiss nor play Beneath the moon In that alleyway Over there. Right? Please comfort ...