RatchetWriter

Ah... A very nice read. I don't know about poetry though. Anyways Admiring you Jade eyes only in memory. I don't know if I'm right or not, maybe you meant ...

Oh man. I've been gone for a week and have just read this. SCARIEST THING I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME! But so very holding...... Sadly I haven't anything to ...

Hmm, sorry I haven't posted on this very soon. Ahem, pic is actually............................er.................. :oops: Better than I can draw a human. :lol: Pretty good I think actually. Enough o

Hmm, very sad kind of. (maybe it's because I'm listening to sad celtic music :D ) I'm not much for poetry, but its difference to other things was intresting and ...

Ok, I, with my inexperience in grammar, I am not going to find anything of that sort, as everyone else has done that. (I guess that's the advantage of criting ...

It's great! Okay, I'm not much on the detailed crits, mainly because I don't know the stuff, but, His deputy, Deputy Luke Woods, The repitition of deputy is bad. My ...

Ah, no crits? I'll have to fix that. (not that I'm good at crits :cry: ) I think Storm Snatchers is a good title. Only a few misspellings saying that ...

Well! I'm reading your story through and it's real absorbing. Good work! I don't know what others think, but I like the longish introductions to the characters. It just seemed ...

Hey, very intresting and well written. Basicly it's very good, but it took me awhile to tell the way you were writing this, it's a different style than normal. Good ...

Hey! More of a really good story! If you can get 20 or 30 chapters you may want to try publishing this! Hope you're still enjoying writing this, becuase I'm ...

Hey! Great story! All I got to say is it's nice you had them screeching around corners when you described the character, it makes it seem like their going somewhere ...

Hello! After another effort of trying to find something to crit on this, I have come up with the following pathetic contribution. He opened his mouth to speak but another ...

Hey! I'm a big fan of Eragon and Star Wars to. I'm nowhere near eighty-seven books, but I appreciate the fact that you know all those characters and are not ...

Wow. I read the whole thing all the way through, and it is REALLY GOOD! I must be a fan of this type of stuff, because I really enjoyed what ...

I really wish I had something to help you improve, but I don't. This is great! It could become a really good short story, I think you should keep going! ...