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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 14
Hello Joj0! It is great to have you here, and thank you for taking the time to read my story!!!! Your words inspire me to keep writing and keep improving ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 13
HELLO MESSY!!!! I love reading your reviews so much, they are very insightful! Yes, I did notice that some of my writing here was a bit contradictive... The Marin we ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 12
Hi Cats, it's great to hear from you!!! I am starting to think that this delete thing is a formatting error from where I copy paste my chapters from to ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 11
Hello Messy! Thank you again for taking the time to read my story. I also agree that I do need to further improve on my writing structure. I have taken ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 10
Hi Messy!! Its great to always hear from you. I did fix many of the things you suggested in this chapter. And I added more at the end, I can ...
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Re: What is Love?
I hope you dont think it is... I tried to spent a decent bit writing this, your poem was very interesting to think about
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 7
Hello Cats! Thank you for being able to review my work, it means a lot to me!! Kei and Kukui are just very troubled teenagers, its so upsetting to see... ...
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Re: grimacing at the sand on our feet (but i can't escape the softness of his lips)
Oh my goodness! I love this very much, I was kicking my feet up in the air as I read this. You make the theme of romance very clear and ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 8
Hello again Messy! Where I am from student councils don't do much or are that important but I do know in Japanese media, they are very highly honored and are ...
Sep 10, 2025 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 7
Hello Messy! It's a pleasure to hear from you again. Thank you for reading my story!! I should have taken more care into revising and editing this part as there ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 4
You play the piano? That sounds so interesting, I would love to hear you play!!
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 5
Hello again Messy, its so great to have a familiar face! I did work on some things in the chapter so thank you! Kukui is one of my favorites, I ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 4
Hello Cats, I really enjoy the Cat Method! Keep on using it!!! I enjoy reading your reviews and comments very much, I find much valuable feedback on it.
Sep 8, 2025 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 4
Hello Messy, it is truly so great to hear from you! Thank you for taking the time to read my story, I like to hear what you have to say ...
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Re: the boy in the corner
I feel so silly, I must not have been paying attention properly. Forgive me...
Sep 7, 2025