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Re: How difficult life could be - Chapter 1
Hey there, I am so glad you requested a review :) on to it: They are still not here, I’m tired already; however, this isn't the first time my parents ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Removed
Hey, Thank you so much for requesting a review. It seems as though you have had alot of good information through some of your reviews, so I won't become redundant. ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: American Disaster (edited)
Hey, Thank you so much for requesting a review! Unfortunately I don't think this will be too helpful because I really enjoyed it. I loved the imagery and the flow ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Just Another Spooky Ride
Hey, Im so happy to be reviewing for you today. I hope it helps improve your work, and you might learn a little something too :) On to your review: ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: When the Blood Smears * Chapter 2
Hey there, I really enjoyed the follow up chapter! There weren't as many mistakes as the first chapter, but I did want to point out that i would love to ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Crank!!!!! Ellen Hopkins =)
I have all of her books and I am so happy to hear that a new one is coming out soon. her books are addictive. The order of them is: ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: When the Blood Smears
Hello and welcome to YWS, I see that you are new, and I would highly encourage you to review some other works. :) On to your review: Franklin High is ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Drive
Hello, This was an amazing piece! It was like reading real literature out of a book. Some of your dialogue needs quotation marks, and the dialogue gets bit confusing in ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: I Never Understood
Hey there :) Im not really here to give you a review. I just wanted to say that's some amazing poetry skills you have. I enjoyed this very much. keep ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: romance fiction
Hello :), I am happy to be reviewing your romance story. Please forgive me if I am a little harsh; I just want to give you the best possible review ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: The Life of a Teenage Girl
Hey, Welcome, and wow I really enjoyed this piece. For you being a total novice ( :) ) this was really good. I could relate to the images you portrayed ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: I'll Never Understand
hello :) I read this as soon as you asked for a review, but I could never find the time to give you a proper review. So, here I am ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Dream On
Hello, Here as requested :) I am not too good at reviewing poetry but I will do my best. A blood-red stain on mine inner eye. mine should be my ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Seashell
Hey, Sorry it took me so long to come and give you a review, but I just came back from an amazing summer camp. i read through your reviews and ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart- Chapter-8
Hey, Here as you asked :). It was really short to be a chapter, but once again it's not being seperated in to a story form. For example: Here is ...
Jun 17, 2010
