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Re: Savor It
What an incredibly beautiful way to comment on today and tomorrow. It's a piece that while simple- (in a loving way) never once feels like it's glossing over what it's ...
Apr 30, 2025 -
Re: where it began (i can't pretend to know when)
So this is definitely an interesting one. I like the casual language used and the overall tone of it all. It definitely feels confident and like it knows itself and ...
Apr 30, 2025 -
Re: 🥀🫀Valentine Hearts🫀🥀
I love how you did so much with so little, it's a beautiful poem that tells you so much without telling you anything. I love it! My favourite of these ...
Feb 23, 2024 -
Re: The Definition of "Her"
Utterly beautiful. I love the way you use such every day words and attach your own meanings onto them, constantly reminding the reader of the definitions. It's truly brilliant. I ...
Feb 23, 2024 -
Re: Please.. Just look my way
Really interesting read here. I love the raw emotion you get from the pleas. I also love the sense of desperation in almost every line here. Truly feels real and ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: talking at night
A real interesting read! I love the visual you create with every line, and the end hits so hard. I think I really like the sense of nostalgia you get ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: Monologue About Abuse
I adore the way the writing makes you feel as though you're actually talking to the narrator. It feels entirely real, they're truly recounting the night they freed themselves. The ...
Feb 21, 2024
