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Re: Nature
Argggghhhh, why did you have to end it there? I wanted more out of that poem, I wanted it to go on a little further! I loved how you described ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: The Call
The voice in my head the whole way through this was hushed and spooky; very appropriate for Halloween. I loved the way you painted this picture of a call in ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: A House's tale
I like this poem; it has a very deep and harrowing feel to it, I love the style of the whole piece, and the fact that you've used the voice ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: This Madness
Wow, this is really good. "im free" This punctuation is slightly wrong; if the whole poem was like this then I wouldn't have batted an eyelid, but as the whole ...
Nov 1, 2014
