Raindeer

Thaaaaanks :D

Thanks... Ahhh, tenses. Those and commas are the hardest part for me. :P

Thank you :)

Thanks for all the nitpick point outs! :D I'll fix those sooner or later... ahha.

Yes, that's true. I'm really glad I joined here, you're right - a site like this is so great to get honest constructive feedback, but also encouragement too. :D

Thanks! I know, I need to work on imagery/description :/ It's one of my weakest points. Thank you again! And Lavender's blind, by the way. :P

No problem! Glad I could be of some assistance.

Okay :) It's fine. Everyone has their own style of writing, it's usually just more professional I think, to make a new paragraph before someone speaks. Haha :D Yes I ...

Really? 0.0 That's awfully strange...

Ooooh, adverbs!

Yep :P

I usually just do italics for thoughts, but it's your call.

Awh, thank you!! That just made my day, hahaa

Haha. I loved this. :P But Ihoneyly don't know how to review is sooo... xP

Ooooh! I sincerely hope you will get that chance to present nationally. Good luck:) and you're welcome