Raindeer

Aw :') Thank you so much!

Thank you so much! Much appreciated. I'll definitely work on the showing not telling - it's always seemed to be a trouble of mine. Thanks so much for pointing those ...

Thank you for the review! Also, I love your profile picture :p

Thank you for the review! :)

Thank you very much! I definitely have to agree that some of the wording is a bit awkward - thank you for pointing that out.

Ah I see! Yes, writing something in around 250 words is very difficult xp Glad I could help!

I think it's clear how it is now, but I think it's fine it you do italicize it.

Oh, okay! Totally understandable. Write write and write

Oh my gosh, I didn't even realize xD Maybe I should backtrack and read them all. Thanks for letting me know!

Awesome, and I'm glad it was helpful :D It has been a while

Thank you so much! I definitely agree with the whole add more description - I always have trouble on that. Thanks so much!

Thank you very much!^^ I definitely agree with the whole dialogue/action part; adding more description and action is always pretty hard for me! Thanks so much for the review.

Thank you so much!

Thank you!

Thank you :)