Raindeer

Hey there! I was really intrigued by this because I love short stories/stories with the theme of “love being what pulls people through”. I think you’ve established a really good ...

Hey there Andrew! I was intrigued by this because my English class last year actually read The Stranger by Camus, and I think we may have even talked about that ...

Hey there! I'm happy to have caught this in the green room right at the first chapter! I think you've set up a really interesting start, and I'm already really ...

Hello Em16! I hardly /ever/ review poetry but I was looking for something to review on this fine day for Team Tortoise and found this in the Green Room! I ...

Hey!!! Okay, so, :OOO. We meet Herschel! First off, I do want to say that the name Herschel is both extremely haunting but also carries this sweetness to it because ...

Heya Chris! What an interesting story!! This carries a very solemn/mysterious/lonely/betrayed tone to it, which I absolutely adore. Henry’s mother’s betrayal (well, I would call it a betrayal!) wa

Hey ChrisDixon! Here as requested. This was certainly an interesting read! I like the idea of a character who’s unsure of who they are—and likely feels forgotten, lonely, and lost ...

Hey, Necromancer! I was looking for something to review and I saw this in the back of the Green Room, so decided to read it! I know I haven’t read ...

Hiya!! Heroically snoozing, just what Harry & Rose needed. I really like that scene, because it shows really nicely how close Harry and Rose are. They’re more than just partners ...

Hi Em16! I decided to read this because I love mac n cheese! I wasn’t aware of a lot of facts (how did I not know Jefferson made mac n ...

Hi Shadeflame! So, we find out that Alyss has healing powers! I think that's really neat. Her confusion/hurt was nicely conveyed in this chapter; the description of her being squashed ...

Hey there Harry! I’m doing Team Tortoise and needed something to review; I saw this and it piqued my interest! The intro was really neat and set the tone nicely. ...

Hi again Shadeflame! I'm back for Team Tortoise. I read the first part of this chapter so I'm in the loop! I'm really loving this story so far. The influence ...

Hey there Shadeflame! I’m pretty sure I reviewed an earlier chapter of this (it is very familiar, but I could be mistaken) and I saw it in the Green Room ...

Hello Lib! Am I.... finally caught up? Whaaaaat. Crazy. Anyway, let’s jump right in. Zoya is easily becoming my favorite character. Her knowledge and wit is really pulling me in! ...