Raindeer

Hi there, Erika! c: Your title really intriguied me, so here I am to review. I haven't written a review in ages so please excuse my rusty-ness haha! Just a ...

Hi Eros! A few nitpicks to start off with-- He was shocked. I'm sure this can be a much stronger statement! How can us readers tell Marldon is shocked? Maybe ...

Heya Eros! Happy Review Day! :D The plot definitely progressed in this chapter! Freznel must be so terrified. This particular chapter, I have to say, was a /bit/ confusing. I ...

Hi Eros! This was definitely a very interesting, action packed chapter! A lot went on here - which is good, because I was entertained the entire time. I loved how ...

Hey Eros! Long time no review! Guess what this is? My 200th review yo. " I said that would be better. But now, I am afraid. What if he is ...

Hey Sunset! Rain here for a quick lil review on review day!

Hey there Alice! I actually haven't read a few of the previous chapters, (and I feel really awful about that) but this was so lonely in the Green Room so ...

Hi again, Eros! Well, I officially super duper hate Steward. And his friend. Gosh! I wonder what they can be up to? Hmm... Nitpicky things -- Hey! I am tinking ...

Hey there jessiebear!

Yo, Eros! What a... creepy chapter! I really don't like this Erwin guy. Or Steward. Both are suspicious, and very very creepy. I'm starting to get frustrated with Freznel! Haha. ...

Hi! ^_^ Here as requested; this review is brought to you by Reviewing Ravens. April-May Review day. Here we go! With my thoughts whirling and endless hurling, - This suggests ...

Hi again! This will be my tenth review to become a knight of the green room! Woop! This was certainly an interesting chapter! I'm actually really concerned for Freznel; I ...

Hi again, Eros! Binge reviewing here ahah. Just before I start more serious/real commenting, I just wanted to point out that there's no reason to put a space after quotation ...

Hiiii!^o^ Let's start with nitpicks- She took pains, because she knew the 10 lettered golden rule, I'm a bit confused - what pains is she taking? :O fatigued hazel eyes ...

Hey again, Eros! Another review brought to you by the Reviewing Ravens!~ I must say, I enjoyed this chapter a lot more than the last! I felt that the description ...