Raindeer

Hey! It's nearly a month late, but welcome to YWS. This is a good start to the story so far! Though I'm not much of a fan of dream starts ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS. What an interesting and informative essay. I think this may be the first essay I've reviewed on YWS, but I have had to read/critique some ...

Hi again marm! So, I'm totally enjoying this story and I like where it's headed. The ending totally threw me off - I thought Jack was going to say he ...

Hey marm! I absolutely love this plot. Romance/self discover/growing up stories are always a favorite of mine, and combined with the crazy but amazing time travel plot just... ah

Hey felistia! I'm here again to deliver a review for you! I thought this was quite the interesting chapter because we see Zoltar stand up for himself, in a way. ...

Hello felistia! Back again. So here is where the quest is introduced, from what I read in chapter 18 or something, haha. I'm very curious as to what the Ruby ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS. I don't normally review poetry, but I saw this in the green room and decided to take a stab at it (I'm trying to get ...

Hello again felistia! Back again from the beginning - I've read the previous three chapters so now I have a better sense of the world and characters. Hisster is quite ...

Hey there, Felistia! EternalRain here for a review (I apologize if it's not top notch, I'm just getting back into reviewing - I'm a bit rusty). So, I haven't read ...

Dogs! Hello! It's been a while. Sorry for the delay - you've already got 3 amazing reviews but I thought I'd jump in really quick to say a couple things. ...

Hey there! So, I was totally intrigued by the description because I absolutely love mermaids/mermen - I find them fascinating and incredibly beautiful (I am actually also planning a mermaid ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! Aw, no one's here to judge! If my review feels like I'm judging you, I can 134.78% assure you that I am not. I'm simply ...

Hello there! Happy Review Day. What a lovely but terrifying story. The narrator - the old woman - was very observant and I loved how that was portrayed through the ...

Hey! Something I noticed in a few places of dialogue -- "Yes." Andrei said with a proud smile. Instead of a period, you can use a comma after "Yes". When ...

Hello! I love the relationship so far with Sonya and Andrei. I can't wait to see how it's going to develop soon in later chapters, and if they'll be working ...