Rahul

Hey.. I like it just be a little easy make it simple and easy to re dares

good potential its like a betray poem presented in a very touching manner good work.!

Well. I really like your perspective of your story specially in the first paragraph sometimes I don't understand who is the speaker and who is the listener Though it's really ...

and shoot me in PM my other mistakes.. Thanks

Your story is good, i really like the idea of jogging love i just want to add if your character is workaholic.. then show his nature, how he left his ...

really great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

really awesome.. keep writing the title of the poem really describes the poem

its nice .. I really like the idea the fault which i find here i, its seem like a play don't start the dialogue with the name put" "s it ...

i like it.. kids will love it keep it up.. just u are taking the story too Deep keep writing!!!

1st of all i notice u get very less comments please short your story divides the parts you have made into different posts then only anyone will read it,,,

good pretty good.. I like your details keep up the good work.

good pretty good.. I like your details keep up the good work.