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Re: The Heart
Ever light this poem is very, there are a lot of poems about hearts out here but your is new and original. I love how builds and each line relates ...
Oct 29, 2019 -
Re: The Far Stars
Sorry I submitted a comment on accident without any words. I have my elegant moments of FAIL, you witnessed one of them. Now to your beautiful Poetry. First of all, ...
Oct 28, 2019 -
Re: didn't you know i'd miss you
Very nice job. Your melody is soft, gentle, yet sad. It has a very unique feel to it. Lyric wise it was very rich and full of meaning. It flowed ...
Oct 27, 2019 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Prologue)
First of all can I just say I am in literal love with your title!!!!!!!!!! I am writing a book that is based on the stars and I.... I don't ...
Oct 16, 2019 -
Re: Ice & Magic - Chapter Two
Already you have built this very visual fantasy world. I loved how you talked about magic like it's a life force. Here you said: She'd heard them arguing for a ...
Oct 16, 2019 -
Re: Prologue
Wow! This prologue really had me going. First of all I wanted to see that I absolutely love the romance you had going in between the two characters at the ...
Oct 15, 2019 -
Re: How Do You Plead: 1.2
I have never sat down and read a full mystery book before, so my knowledge is non but I really loved this piece. The dialogue is very rich and interactive ...
Oct 14, 2019
