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  • Short Story » Politics, Action / Adventure Re: TAKING OVER

    Hi Logan! I see a lot of things going on here that I like. I got glimpses of the narrator's personality, and we also got glimpses into his (I'm assuming ...

    Mar 16, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Mostly Ghostly Chapter 1

    Oh, Starhunter, this had me giggling and chuckling and trying very hard not to make a spectacle out of myself. I'm not in a public place at all or something ...

    Mar 8, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Prologue

    Shadow, I love your writing voice. Seriously. A bit mischievous, a bit whimsical, but easy to follow and storybook-like. Love it, love it, love it. And I also love that ...

    Mar 1, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: ORION

    HI, MJS! And welcome to YWS! I'm Rachael, better known as Rach, and as I'm guessing this is your first YWS review ever (how exciting!), I'll just state the obvious ...

    Mar 1, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Sicarii. Prologue

    Oh, this has so much cleverness in it that I can't resist liking it. A bit Lord of the RIngs, a bit Princess Bride, a bit Monty Python, a bit ...

    Feb 8, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Off the Road - Prologue

    Celtica! It's Rach here... obviously. I don't know if I've ever reviewed anything of yours before, but I remember you talking about this project on chat last night, and your ...

    Feb 8, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue

    Hi, Ahmad! I don't believe I've ever reviewed for you before, which is a shame. You also have a multitude of other opinions here--which I haven't read through, because I ...

    Jan 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Something for Nothing ~ 1

    So. Ooey-Gooey, my delicious one with whom I share some sort of creepy trans-oceanic ESP connection, This made me happy. Strangely, because it's dark and edgy and stuff and shouldn't ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Revil - Chapter 3

    Well, reading this backwards is certainly an interesting experience. I guess I was wrong about Revil being on some revenge-mission against everyone who wronged him. Have I mentioned how much ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Revil - Chapter Four

    Kasim!!! Hi. :D So, on the one hand, I pretty much have no idea what's going on. I haven't read the previous installments, but by the end of reading this, ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Sovereign - Part One - Chapter One

    Hey K. Rene! This was a delightfully intriguing mix of fantasy and science fiction, and I'm curious about whether this is Earth minus Antarctica (don't tell me if I'm right ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Nightmare - part one - one

    Hello again! When I saw you posted something new, I just had to come by. And... the emotion was here again. The whole nightmare thing gave me pause at first, ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Unarmed - chapter one

    Hey NightWriter, my dear. Here to review! First and most importantly, the emotion in this piece was so very there, rich and present and painful. As a reader, it made ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Red Cloak Part 3

    Hey, Leah! This was so short I don't know how much I can say about it. One quick typo before I go onto other stuff: She felt aweful for being ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Close Call

    Hi, Janika! Rach here. So I have plenty of nice things to say soon, but first, to be blunt, the first part of this story lost me some. Not that ...

    Dec 9, 2011


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