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Re: TAKING OVER
Hi Logan! I see a lot of things going on here that I like. I got glimpses of the narrator's personality, and we also got glimpses into his (I'm assuming ...
Mar 16, 2012 -
Re: Mostly Ghostly Chapter 1
Oh, Starhunter, this had me giggling and chuckling and trying very hard not to make a spectacle out of myself. I'm not in a public place at all or something ...
Mar 8, 2012 -
Re: Prologue
Shadow, I love your writing voice. Seriously. A bit mischievous, a bit whimsical, but easy to follow and storybook-like. Love it, love it, love it. And I also love that ...
Mar 1, 2012 -
Re: ORION
HI, MJS! And welcome to YWS! I'm Rachael, better known as Rach, and as I'm guessing this is your first YWS review ever (how exciting!), I'll just state the obvious ...
Mar 1, 2012 -
Re: Sicarii. Prologue
Oh, this has so much cleverness in it that I can't resist liking it. A bit Lord of the RIngs, a bit Princess Bride, a bit Monty Python, a bit ...
Feb 8, 2012 -
Re: Off the Road - Prologue
Celtica! It's Rach here... obviously. I don't know if I've ever reviewed anything of yours before, but I remember you talking about this project on chat last night, and your ...
Feb 8, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue
Hi, Ahmad! I don't believe I've ever reviewed for you before, which is a shame. You also have a multitude of other opinions here--which I haven't read through, because I ...
Jan 30, 2012 -
Re: Something for Nothing ~ 1
So. Ooey-Gooey, my delicious one with whom I share some sort of creepy trans-oceanic ESP connection, This made me happy. Strangely, because it's dark and edgy and stuff and shouldn't ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Revil - Chapter 3
Well, reading this backwards is certainly an interesting experience. I guess I was wrong about Revil being on some revenge-mission against everyone who wronged him. Have I mentioned how much ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Revil - Chapter Four
Kasim!!! Hi. :D So, on the one hand, I pretty much have no idea what's going on. I haven't read the previous installments, but by the end of reading this, ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Sovereign - Part One - Chapter One
Hey K. Rene! This was a delightfully intriguing mix of fantasy and science fiction, and I'm curious about whether this is Earth minus Antarctica (don't tell me if I'm right ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare - part one - one
Hello again! When I saw you posted something new, I just had to come by. And... the emotion was here again. The whole nightmare thing gave me pause at first, ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Unarmed - chapter one
Hey NightWriter, my dear. Here to review! First and most importantly, the emotion in this piece was so very there, rich and present and painful. As a reader, it made ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: The Red Cloak Part 3
Hey, Leah! This was so short I don't know how much I can say about it. One quick typo before I go onto other stuff: She felt aweful for being ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: A Close Call
Hi, Janika! Rach here. So I have plenty of nice things to say soon, but first, to be blunt, the first part of this story lost me some. Not that ...
Dec 9, 2011
