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Hi, Destiny! I don't think we've met before... I'm Rach, the frog's Ribbit. Together we're one mad reviewing team. Like Banjo and Kazookie. Or... nevermind. Anyway, I'm really glad I ...

Hi, Ash! I liked this. Very different from the usual fantasy openings. Nice and calm, simple, soothing almost. A conflict not about the end of the world but something more ...

Ohh, drama. I hear it coming. If she likes Erick and Will gets his act together, then... *frets*. ..ignore that. That's just me being invested in the story. Because I ...

Hi, my lovely. I'm finally here to review for you. I'm glad I waited. Frankly, I didn't think I'd have anything to say. Knowing your writing as well as I ...

Yo, Formslipper. I'm Rach, here to review for ya. What I liked about this was its control. It was a very controlled narrative. It flowed well and with direction. It ...

Okay, this was seriously awesome. So awesome for so many reasons. I think I want to go read it again. It was awesome. (Hello, by the way! I'm Rach :D) ...

Hi, IKnowAll. Good job with the paragraphs, and the cutting down on ellipses. Much better, though you could probably get rid of the rest of the ellipses here anyway with ...

Hi, Anonymous Anarchist! I was going to nickname you AA but then I realized that wouldn't quite work...hehe. Anyway, I'm here to review, and at this point, I just have ...

Hi Crimsona! I think I reviewed a chapter of this waaaay back when, but I haven't read the chapters in between then and now. So, I'm going to be useless ...

Hi, Soulkana! Here to review as best I can...I haven't read the other chapters so I won't be able to get into too much detail. What happened was that I ...

Snoinkus, I am here. It is 10:25 pm. My essay is edited (read: I have up on the essay once it reached turn-inable) and I am tired, but I am ...

I was on this like a frog to a lilypad. Hehe. Anyway, hello. I hope I'm your first response. I do enjoy being the first person to respond so. It's ...

And you are hereby forgiven for the length of the previous chapter. Downside of having to read things in serial-style online, I suspect. So I take back my comments from ...

Hi Vi! I haven't read the original version of this, so this is going to be a review not taking the whole 'revised' part into account. Obviously, it's polished, as ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. I think that was enough w's. No, wait, I lied. Few more: wwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. True to your word, this was short, and sweet, and absolutely adorable. So, thank you for ...