RachMilty

I love the concept of this. You break the fourth wall by addressing the audience very effectively. It's an inspiring message. I also enjoyed the fact that I went through ...

This is a great poem. I like the imagery and the metaphors that are present. "the hard strikings.." you change tenses from got to was, so was should be were. ...

Hey Sree! Sorry, I didn't review sooner I was on a vaca with my family, AND I got sick. It was still a good week though. I'm only going to ...

Hi there! I enjoy this poem a lot. It’s the perfect length I think, and has a nice rhyme scheme. My first suggestion would be to add a space at ...

This is an awesome story. Totally action packed! The characters are believable and active. Imagery and description are also spot on. I think my only advice would be to look ...

I like this poem a lot. Especially the last couple lines. They provide a very nice resolution to the "story." more great imagery and description... and this topic is also ...

Hi again! This is another great poem, albeit a little one! I like little poems. They can be hard though, as you remember and see more of the whole thing ...

I really enjoyed reading your poem. Right from the beginning, you pull us in with that first line. You have some great imagery, and the theme is relatable and believable. ...

I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It's a great topic to write about, and your theme is very clear. The feeling I got from this is that its teenagers ...

I love this poem because 11:11 is a favorite time in my family. We have done very special things to celebrate that time, so the topic of this poem is ...

Your poem took an unexpected turn! I love it! I think you may want to add setting details somewhere because when I imagined this person sitting, it was in a ...

This is a very impressive poem! It's lengthy which is something I find difficult at times, so I commend you for finding more to add to it. I love how ...

This is a wonderful poem! I love your use of white space. It's very creative. I also enjoyed how you employed the title as your first line of the poem. ...