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Hello, Veeren. I really appreciate your comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed this story, which I know can be a little bit confusing at first (but I'm also a big ...

Hello, Demeter. I'm glad you liked the story. I indeed de-personified one of the two men by using the personification of it's body parts. I took that risk because, well, ...

Hi Omniyus. Sorry for not responding before. I agree with you: grammar can always be better. When I write in english I usually have a lot of little grammatical mistakes, ...

Hi Lava. Sorry for not responding before. I think I get what you're saying, so I'll try to do that. It's going to be a little bit difficult, because I ...

That's odd, for I thought it was too... fictitious. Haha! Anyway, I'm glad you have enjoyed the story.

Thanks. I'm glad you have enjoyed it.

Well, the thing is that it's not an essay; it's a letter, and it should work as some sort of epistolary short story. It should be read as fiction, as ...

Well, some people who are starting as writers are often afraid of letting their characters to be like them. It shoudn't be that way, and you should, in fact, let ...

Thanks for your review, Zephion! I hope you have enjoyed it, and I'll see if it can be changed. I do know that line mess a little bit with the ...

Thanks, Hiccup! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for your review! The thing with the scheme... I'm aware of it, and it's a long story why is it there. Still, I wanted to try out how it ...

Sorry, I don't get it.

Hahaha! Well, it's just my opinion, and I there's usually something I don't like in most of the stories I have read, even in great works. Hahaha! Who knows? Maybe ...

Perfect! I needed to know all those things, especially the things about grammar. It's been a long time, but I'm sure I still have some of those errors. I really ...