ROD

Excellent prose. The story kept my attention the whole time. The ending? Dark but I enjoyed it a lot. The only thing is that, as a humour story, is not ...

Overall, I enjoyed this story. It has its flaws, sure, but there is great material here, a very well-handled concept, an irreverent narrator who is likeable and makes of this ...

Well, there's a lot of errors. I think they are obvious, so I'm not even going to point them out. The story itself... well, this is not a story, at ...

The story is awesome... for me. That's the thing: I feel it could only be awesome for me. I love both the narrator and the narrative. I feel the narrator ...

I had high hopes. It's not a bad story, it just didn't lived up to them. I will start by telling you how my hopes were built: The thing is ...

I'll be short: this is good story. I mean, it has some things that do not work as they should and some little errors, but, overall, I enjoyed it and ...

Dude, we have that "age" thing for something! Fill it out, man! What if you have only twelve and I'm about to totally destroy your story? What then? If that ...

It's a simple poem, but it's fine. It seems sometimes has a pattern in the lenght of the verses, and sometimes it doesn't (from what I could tell; my language ...

I read this and I think that the term "tarantinoing" should be a real word. You create and define these characters (more as whole than as individuals, in my opinion, ...

Well, I have to say I love the idea. I agree with Twit when he says that knowing what happens inside the tent builds an atmosphere of mystery that reminds ...

I don't think this is a short story; not at all. This seems to me more like a summary, either of a novel or a short story. You could expand ...