RGallagher

Hey! I was sixteen; with top grades, silky brown hair and I used to run track. That sentence seems, idk, clunky? It doesn't flow very well. I lost passion just ...

Wow. This is pretty well written story, IMO. I like how you have Darry reacting his his little brother, treating him like he's just a pest. His reaction to seeing ...

Death is always in the back of peoples minds not matter how comfortable you think you are with it or how long you will haunt you until the day it ...

Like I said on your last post, you need to review 2 things for every 1 thing you post. And again, this doesn't belong here. This is an area to ...

Alright, first of all, you need 2 reviews before you're supposed to post your stuff and you're expected to keep up that 2/1 ratio. You're now at a 0/2 ratio... ...

Alright, only a few nitpicks so I'll get them out of the way first. I let a tear fall down my cheek as my best friend Chase Aaron's strode into ...

Alright, poetry reviews aren't my specialty but I'll give it a try... I liked the poem. You used good description to paint a picture. It really makes you picture a ...

I really liked this. I couldn't spot any nitpicks. (but then again its almost midnight. I'll double check in the morning.) You did a great job with detail. The only ...

Yay! Another person wrote something based on one of my prompts! Keep it up guys! My parents brought up my little brother to be the least bit of gay. That's ...

yay! You used my prompt!

Alrighty! I didn't really find any nitpicks that jumped out at me. It's well written but it leaves a lot of questions. You started out right in the middle of ...

Since this is short, it's hard to give a long critique, but I'll do my best! It seems well written and error free. No grammar, punctuation or spelling errors jump ...

Nit-picks first! It wasn’t my fault really, it was the necklaces. Necklace's you forgot an apostrophe The car smelled McDonalds, and the driver couldn't stop talking about his recent visit ...

There seems to be a lot less mistakes in this chapter. I'm too lazy at this point to do a line-by-line but I'll tell you what to look out for. ...

First of all, you're supposed to have 2 reviews under your belt before you post a writing of yours. I'll ignore that for now, but I suggest you go review ...