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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Last

    Yeah thanks for all the feedback, most of you said that the flow was off but it honestly isn't (no disrespect) I'll record it for you guys when I get ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shades of Light Prologue/Chapter 1 Pt. 1

    Thank you :) At first I was heartbroken by your review that's why it took me so long to reply haha I've been really excited about my story and I ...

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life is Like Sand

    This is deep from my shallow point of view, it really makes you think. I'm pretty bad at poetry, but I just wanted you to know that I liked it. ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Harmony (Loveless)

    Thanks, but it wasn't actually about a girl... The song was a metaphor "Harmony" (first name) with myself is what I gained. "Peace" (middle name) is what that harmony gave ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Harmony (Loveless)

    Yeah I guess so, thanks :)

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Last

    I love the honesty, thanks. And I'll return the favor.

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Invincible

    This was awesome, I'm trying to learn how to play the guitar so I envy you lol But the lyrics are good, and the concept was nice; the quality is ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Portrait of His Funeral (reviews please?)

    Your imagery is great. I like your ending; I understand what you were saying. I don't know why but this poem just feels kind of dull to me, but it's ...

    Dec 27, 2009


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