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Re: Last
Yeah thanks for all the feedback, most of you said that the flow was off but it honestly isn't (no disrespect) I'll record it for you guys when I get ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Light Prologue/Chapter 1 Pt. 1
Thank you :) At first I was heartbroken by your review that's why it took me so long to reply haha I've been really excited about my story and I ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Life is Like Sand
This is deep from my shallow point of view, it really makes you think. I'm pretty bad at poetry, but I just wanted you to know that I liked it. ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Harmony (Loveless)
Thanks, but it wasn't actually about a girl... The song was a metaphor "Harmony" (first name) with myself is what I gained. "Peace" (middle name) is what that harmony gave ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Harmony (Loveless)
Yeah I guess so, thanks :)
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Last
I love the honesty, thanks. And I'll return the favor.
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Invincible
This was awesome, I'm trying to learn how to play the guitar so I envy you lol But the lyrics are good, and the concept was nice; the quality is ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Portrait of His Funeral (reviews please?)
Your imagery is great. I like your ending; I understand what you were saying. I don't know why but this poem just feels kind of dull to me, but it's ...
Dec 27, 2009
