Quinine

The paragraph breaks were not originally there, I'm not sure why they were there when I published it. Also, I'm not sure if there will be more...but possibly.

What is meant to be conveyed is that the winter coat protects from the needles when climbing a pine tree :) (This I know from experience.)

I'm not sure of the style :P Also, the portrayal of brutality in gardening was simply for the novel and poetic value. I can't agree with you in that eating ...

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely make some of these changes :)

Thanks!

Thanks for the review! I might try to do one of your suggestions, they were very helpful :)

This will be a very short review :) Very nice story! I like it. Your writing is pleasurable and simple to read. However, either the writing is aimless to a ...

Ah okay!

Yes, that is what I said

Twilight is not spelled wrong-twilit is actually a word. It means lit by the light of twilight.

Ah okay, thanks for the advice :) In my mind, it seemed clear to me that the phrase "awe struck" was earned by the view from the nesting point of ...

You're welcome :)

Thanks!

Wow! Nice!

Missing Period: "the calm waves across the sea*.*" Missing Commas: "better left forgot*,* to my own" "your words remain anchors chained*,*" "i yearn for your lies at this moment*,*" Nonsensical ...