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Thank you, it helps a lot, I will take to it. I hope you review more of my work

Thank you,I'm grateful... I wanted to put @ but I thought it wasn't necessary

Hello ScytheaMeisterChan, this's my work please read and give it a review

Its gonna make a good story,you are good to go,You would make an amazing writer. For your first story,you are really good.I give you a thumbs up. ...The way you ...

Thanks,I'm grateful

Thank you MemoryHunnter and Asith, I wrote the story again heading to your corrections, please help me review this new one.. I used the starter's sign and I took proper ...

Thank you MemoryHunnter and Asith, I wrote the story again heading to your corrections, please help me review this new one.. I used the starter's sign and I took proper ...

Thank you

Thank you,I will do that

Hey,I must say I like your poem,its okay but I think you should have; :Given us a proper description of her,what she looks like maybe she's dark,has a black curly ...

This is great,but I think it shouldn't be all