Quetseli

That was amazing! I loved it! I couldn't find anything that confused me or that was in need of fixing. You described everything so well! Wonderful work! You must continue!

It would be a lovely song if it were real. :3 Good for a child, maybe. I listened to a slow song on my Itunes as I read this and ...

This is a pretty good poem. You seem kinda new to the poem stuff(I am X3), so if you are this is lovely. The story to it is clear, the ...

@Trick. Yeah I'm writing more. I posted a new one just today! Thanks for the review, also! X3

Thsi is a good poem, though I don't see any story to it. But some poems don't have a clear story to which urges reader to figure it out. And ...

It's a lovely poem! Though I'm still trying to understand whats going on. Is something really coming towards her? It's just me, but good job! Keep it up!:3

Aw. I's lovely. It sounds like it has a sad ending to it though, if I'm thinking correct. :P But I think is a sweet poem written to a once ...

It's love. I sense that someone is trying to show how much their love is worth and how they see it by giving it the idea of a painting and ...

It's has a good turn. You talk about this hate for someone else only to turn it around and speak about forgiveness. Has a mixed emotion to it and it's ...