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Re: S.A.M
This is a terribly moving story, and I loved the way S.A.M. is 'taught' emotions, although I do wonder whether he actually felt them, given his lack of any feeling ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Nutrient
Wow! What a fascinating poem! There are many, many features to be discussed here. First, the fact that the plant is suicidal indicates personification, re-enforced by the capitalisation of the ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: So there was this chihuahua...
You know, randomness like this is what makes life worthwhile. There are so many things I like about this: its nonsensical style, its repetition, its irregularity. This was great fun ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: There is something about Sara
There's something about this poem, But I can't quite figure out what. Perhaps it's its heartbreaking quality. Um... But then again, p'raps not. To begin: I really like the way ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: At what was to be. But cannot be.
Very odd. I like the inevitable feel of this poem, and the world-weary attitude of the poem's persona. It reminds me of a painting called 'The Last Man', by John ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Why don't you?
Well, I'm genuinely touched. It's always nice to see something really 'upbeat', as opposed to depressing, and this certainly has a magical, almost fantastical feel. I especially like your "...see ...
Mar 11, 2014
