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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hard Love

    This interesting. It sounds like a song. It should be a song. But I liked it. I feel like it should have better flow. It was sorta choppy and felt ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Eternally Yours

    WOW!!! OMG! As i am writing this i am like crying. This is so beautiful! (i think my boyfriend thinks if gone crazy) but i dont care! I love this. ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part - Chapter 3

    GENIUS!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!! KEEP WRITING!!! :D

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Family Feud

    Haha. yeah. i just got tired and quit on writing. Maybe when I finish you can suggest a title. And I suggest you go to sleep. :D

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Miserable

    thanks.

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Miserable

    Thanks. :D

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dear Mister

    Thanks.

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dear Mister

    Thanks. I'm glad I could make you laugh. And you know I've read this poem many times and never caught that. I'll get right on it. Thanks for the review!

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Broken Spirits:Chapter 1

    yeah it is a little much. Thanks for the review!

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Broken Spirits

    Haha. I will. And to find out the noise and what happens to her you have to read the rest of the book :D

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Public Displays of Affection

    I love this piece I can really relate! Because I hate PDA too. This was cute. A little short. But it was cute. Keep writing!!

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Miserable

    Thanks.

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Fragile

    Aw this was sad. But I liked it. And it also was a little underdeveloped but keep writing :)

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Broken Spirits:Chapter 1

    Thanks for all the reviews, they are really helpful. It gives me al lot to think about. But I do have one question what is a dialogue tag??? Do you ...

    Mar 29, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Evil Angel Chapters 1 & 2

    This is very interesting. Not my cup of tea but it did keep me interested. Keep writing. :D

    Mar 25, 2011


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