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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Inside of a Star [Chapter Three]

    OMG!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! And i am so glad you posted some more!!! I can't wait for me. Keep writing so I can keep reading!!! XD

    May 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The UnBible: The Old Testament: The Book of Genesis

    No, i didn't mean to offend anyone. I'm sorry if I did. This is just for fun. Not trying to offend anyone. purely fiction. :D

    May 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Academy: Initiation Prologue

    This was interesting. I agree this is a little too short to be a prologue. So i suggesy making it longer abnd adding more details. You left a lot of ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Plague

    I loved it . It was really good.I. nw you got a good grade!!! Keep up the great work sisie!! Happy writing!!

    May 3, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Art of Dying

    This was sad but a goodie. I love the imagery. I wish i could do that myself. This is a great job you did splendidly,. Keep writing!!! :D

    May 3, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: PUS and FUGLY

    This was cute in a child-like way. It was entertaining and funny. Keep up the great work. Keep writing!!! XD

    May 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Violet Saga: Prologue Rewrite: Rough Draft 2 Complete

    I love it sis! Except maybe a different pix XD i know i havent been helping lately but i promise to help you more. Great job as alwahs!! Keep writing!! ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sincerely, Brain

    I thought this was cute! Very funny and comedic. Great work!!!! Happy writing!! :D

    May 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Torture Chamber

    This is fabulous! I loved the imagery. Honestly i didnt want it to end. Great job! Keep writing!!! :D

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Bitter Pain

    This is so true and relateable. Great job. Keep writing!!!!

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Animal

    This was great. Feels like something i would write. This poem touched me in a very personal way. I dont know if that is good or bad but anyway great ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Violet Saga: Chapter 8

    SISSY!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Keep up the good work. I'll be here if you need help with the next chapter. As always. :) Keep Writing!!!

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    Good poem. We all can relate. Good job. Happy Writing!!! :D

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Forget Him

    I liked this. I love the emotion. Other than that good luck. keep writing :)

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part - Chapter 6

    EPIC STORY!!! KEEP WRITING SO I CAN KEEP READING!!!!!!! :D

    Apr 20, 2011


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