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I think this would be much stronger broken up into a poem than a story. It has a lot of very good poetic elements. And if it were part of ...

This is an interesting study in descriptive elements. But as far as creative writing goes, its pretty far down the line. Its short, only one paragraph. You don't raise many ...

Wow... Ok, a few pointers, "OMG! I am SOO sorry!" OMG should never be used in any literary piece, for any reason, ever. It makes the piece look unprofessional, and ...

Aside from the fact that I severely disapreciate religiously oriented literature/lyric, nor do I particularly care for poetry, this piece seems to work. The symbollic single last word in each ...

Incan. WTF are you talking about? Everybody re-tells or incorporates old stories into their own literature. the last new plot was used up before written language. incorporating mythology into stories ...

Uhm, this is Galatea replying from a different computer: Yay! Thank you so much for using an art comparison I understood! You are my hero, Sabine. I was just playing ...

its.... interesting, to say the least. there needs to be a bit more depth here. i dont think there is enough there to say anything about it. there really isnt ...