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Re: A Day To Remember
Chilly story. I hope this isn't the last chapter for this short story. I really love horror story and this has caught my interest. I saw a few errors for ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~J Part One
Its a nice start. However I am left with a lot of questions. Why is our protagonist in what i assume to be a prison? Whats the plot? Whats our ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Distorted View - Chapter One
Nice start, however, i'm left with a lot of questions. I liked how you made Caleb a writer as katie implied. We really don't get a writer as a protagonist. ...
Mar 13, 2015